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Sinome
A very gripping poem, because it's also very sad...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 30, 2009 at 5:25 PM
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I feel so sad for Jane reading this poem, especially since it is true.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 30, 2009 at 3:44 PM
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Well done Marts This poem again makes tears want to release the angst felt for Jane. A poignant reminder !
posted by
merkie
on December 30, 2009 at 10:47 AM
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this was a very shocking poem and very well done
posted by
Lanetay
on December 30, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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That is a tragedy
Beautifully written, but so desperately sad a comment on society
posted by
lionreign
on December 30, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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What a sad, but all too common story. At least someone...you....gave here the respect and compassion all human beings deserve. Hope you're doing well. Happy New Year! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 30, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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Ohh, powerfully tragic, Sinome
A sensitive yet raw truth treatment - Well done.
posted by
LizaM
on December 30, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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Beautiful and sad. Jane would be happy knowing some body gave her her place. Your poem is full of passion
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 29, 2009 at 11:52 PM
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so sad and all too common...who cares when a girl of the streets dies
she's just a whore, have written beautiful words for her and all like her. Well you cared and you wrote beautiful words for her and all the poor little Janes of this world.
posted by
Kabu
on December 29, 2009 at 10:18 PM
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Oh Sinome, what a touching and sad tale.
posted by
calia14
on December 29, 2009 at 8:52 PM
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Sinome
You are so very special luv: "May she in death have found the peace and love that she was denied in life."
You gave it to her right here in your beautiful tribute and love to you from K & W
Happy New Year luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 29, 2009 at 8:44 PM
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Amen, May Jane rest in peace. This is so tragic. How very very tragic this is; and it happens much too often. God bless these souls. Elyse
You're lovely Sinome for your compassion.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 29, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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OH GOD......
posted by
Star5_
on December 29, 2009 at 8:01 PM
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