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I only came to say happy new year
and to my pleasant surprise i found this little treasure you left behind. This is one of the most wonderful poems I have read, ESPECIALLY since it is now 6am and I am after a long night of no sleep and stormy rainy night. Regardless, it is a poem worth reading again and again
posted by
Tzippy
on December 31, 2009 at 6:06 AM
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Excellent Abanerjee..oh did I say this poem is excellent? No? Ok - it's excellently brilliant.
posted by
shobana
on December 31, 2009 at 2:34 AM
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Straighforward
I am happy to have brought a smile to your face.
Thank you and a Happy New Year.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 10:31 PM
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Before the sunbeams hit the barns...I like that expression
posted by
Straightforward
on December 30, 2009 at 10:26 PM
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Iniquous
Am so glad to have made your memories come back. Reminiscences, invariably, are filled with sweet emotions. Thank you so very much. I'll return your visit in the morning, having just returned from sam's ... you know the goings-on. So I'll settle more peacefully when I come to read your fine blog.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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One of my favorite childhood memories.
Bathing in the morning sun. Air still chilled, suns warmth undeniable. Often as adults, we don't take time to notice such things. This was a wonderful reminder for me.
posted by
Budguy
on December 30, 2009 at 10:17 PM
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Sinome
My dear friend Marta, you come bringing me joyful gifts with your "Excellent", and "I am so impressed". Oh, that I could impress someone as yourself adept in the art of poetry writing, is really very satiating for me. Thanks a ton xoxoxoxo
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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elysianfields
Thank you Ely, I myself enjoyed doing this too. Each line, except at one place, intentionally broken, has a nursery rhyme like cadence with two similar rhyming words to make it sound pleasing to the ears. I read this haltingly and felt satisfied at the word arrangements. Being new to the art, I am trying different styles. But do teach me with corrections you feel wherever needed. I smile with you
,
Aba.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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WileyJohn
Sir, I do treasure your visits and comments in encouragemnet.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 9:15 PM
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snowview
I am glad you liked and appreciated.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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Kabu
You are one lady, Kabu, who never fails to bring me gifts in cheer, and the result has been a contribution in that very vein. So, thanks so much, ma'am.
posted by
anib
on December 30, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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This is Excellent!!! Wow... I am so impressed!!!! Loved it!!!1 xoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 30, 2009 at 8:28 PM
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Ah ~ LIGHT and dawn's light especially --- in bliss with arms stretched out - this ABA is full, rich with imagery and it's so purely enjoyable - ~ Ely smiles with your poetry
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2009 at 4:31 PM
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abanerjee
Sunlight is just great to wake up to and you've described it so well
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 30, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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Very nice!
posted by
Nita09
on December 30, 2009 at 10:35 AM
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with the dawn it seems all fears subsided. Lovely work and socheerful and
positive the conclusion.
posted by
Kabu
on December 30, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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