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Sometimes we are powerless and what the heck give it to the night! It reminded of how important it is to sleep on things! I really loved the cadence and of course it has most exquisite imagery! I am going to be caught up on your blog and I am so happy! It feels like I have been reading for days and I finally got to posts that were within the last day! Love you so my dear friend and thanks for stopping in to see me, too! sammie

posted by sam444 on January 4, 2010 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

This is really good
I've just been walking round the village in the late afternoon sunshine and your words make a great end of scene narration.

posted by malcolm on January 3, 2010 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful thoughts to sleep by
A great meditation to end the day with.

posted by skye08 on January 3, 2010 at 5:19 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome this is just awesome!
Almost a song which on closing your eyes you can get lost in; beautiful my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 3, 2010 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply

I want so badly to go out and walk in the new-fallen snow in the moonlight, but I know that is foolish because it is 1:00 a.m. and terribly cold and very slick underfoot and I am not as young as I used to be.  So, I will close my eyes and picture it as I know it is, only I will be in the warmth and comfort inside.

posted by TAPS. on January 2, 2010 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 2, 2010 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

sweet

posted by Star5_ on January 2, 2010 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

Marta
The melody one hears when one is lost in the self, is all. I so loved this exquisite imagery. Wow! xoxoxo:)

posted by anib on January 2, 2010 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Etheral edge of the night ooooo serene and drowsy, Excellent Marta!

posted by merkie on January 2, 2010 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.

posted by Darson on January 2, 2010 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

ah, feels like total surrender to peace ~ this I like - xoxox Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 2, 2010 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

beautifully written!

posted by PoetikliNclynd on January 2, 2010 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

A lot of things can keep me awake at night before I finally succumb to the sleep.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 2, 2010 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply