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Powerful and emotive... you express this kind of hurt very well.
posted by
mneme
on January 11, 2010 at 1:40 AM
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Hauntingly well done!
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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Hold my hand like it's my heart.....priceless wordsmithing.
posted by
Darson
on January 4, 2010 at 6:23 AM
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The words do have a way of coming out! I loved this line:
hold my hand like it’s my heart and hear my soul weep Such awesome imagery! Well done, indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2010 at 4:27 AM
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Good one!!! :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 3, 2010 at 9:40 PM
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..when we write, it has a life of its own...well done! moon
posted by
magic_moon
on January 3, 2010 at 5:17 PM
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Voiceless
Yes really nice
posted by
C_C_T
on January 3, 2010 at 12:21 PM
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Writing is a wonderful way with which to express those pent up emotions. I would recommend for everyone to give it a try.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM
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Brilliant!
posted by
merkie
on January 3, 2010 at 10:58 AM
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Double "wow"....
posted by
Troosha
on January 3, 2010 at 9:13 AM
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wow
Mia
posted by
momma_mia
on January 3, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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Vivid imagination
thank you for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 2, 2010 at 10:54 PM
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PoetikliNclynd
This is almost lyrical in its vein, appears as one single honest heartfelt flow. So good!
posted by
anib
on January 2, 2010 at 9:46 PM
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this flows so well --- your pen as your tongue and it's fluent in expression.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 2, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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It will not only take over you, but your entire life, and almost every waking thought....fair warning! The writer's bug is nothing to mess around with!
posted by
Darson
on January 2, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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