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wow I had to read that a few times...that was great
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 5, 2010 at 3:03 PM
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And in Australia, it is so hot, you can fry an egg on the asphalt
it's a lovely poem dear.
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2010 at 2:57 PM
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' Asphalt, diamonds, and wood in personal reflection make for awesome imagery in your poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on January 5, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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LizaM
I loved especially the "asphalt covered diamonds", great poetry luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 4, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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Nice to hear, The Saint!
Thank you so much.
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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You're Welcome, Elinjo..Yes, we do!..
And Thank You; also a big one to Sam..
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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Most appreciated Lionreign!
And Thank You Shelly!..
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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Thank you so much Corncrake and Troosha!
posted by
LizaM
on January 4, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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I had to go to Google to look up the meanings of "zoetic" and "citrine", so as well as sharing a very good poem, you've taught me something! Michael
posted by
The_Saint
on January 4, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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I really like the making of the adjective and thus the poem is very alive! Well done, loved the word placement that set up the imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 4, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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I enjoy reading your poems.
Thanks for contributing so much to the discussion going on in my blog. We see eye to eye!
posted by
elinjo
on January 4, 2010 at 2:13 PM
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very nice
posted by
shelly_b
on January 4, 2010 at 9:29 AM
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wow
great imagery in this poem and some of the lines are ones I wished I had thought of!
posted by
lionreign
on January 4, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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Liza
Great title which came to life with your close to this piece. An exquisite write!
posted by
Troosha
on January 4, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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Blind
Yes this feels like you are searching for something? I'm afraid I'm not into big words, so I had to look them up, to appreciate what you were implying. But I like it
posted by
C_C_T
on January 4, 2010 at 8:26 AM
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