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Oh, I have a few memories from long ago that seem just like that
They make me feel sad
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on January 7, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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*sighhhh..just great
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 7, 2010 at 2:39 PM
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that sometimes can lead to a better long lasting love
posted by
Lanetay
on January 7, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Sinome
This whole poem is like a sigh...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 7, 2010 at 8:36 AM
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Beautiful poem
So melancholy and whistful...
It was not love, it was merely... love? :P xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 7, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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This is beautiful.
I have known many beautiful souls who I wondered about, but, just knew that love was not there. Still, they were very special to me. great writing!!
posted by
Budguy
on January 6, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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Sinome
I loved that imagery or, the reality, that anything which enters perchance and causes nagging pain is best to be uprooted; they lack permanence."It was not love". xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on January 6, 2010 at 8:27 PM
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What is it, Sinome, that makes 'us' shake our souls?
A question that has been perplexing me.
posted by
Straightforward
on January 6, 2010 at 7:49 PM
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Oh this is a very poignant piece when one realizes that the allure - the fascination - the chemistry has gone --- but an incurable romantic always believes and hopes. This touched my heart ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 6, 2010 at 6:59 PM
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I can only imagine how painful it must be to look back and to realize that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 6, 2010 at 6:51 PM
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Mysterious love is always interesting
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 6, 2010 at 5:33 PM
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Nice....hugely deep, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 6, 2010 at 5:13 PM
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It is elusive when one can't really figure it out, even though so real. It reminds me of the situation when we know more about what it isn't more than what we know it is! Very poignant! All my love, too! sammie
posted by
sam444
on January 6, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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