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So deeply true and wonderfully versed, Ash!
  

posted by Katray2 on January 8, 2010 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Short, sweet, meaningful, excellent, Ash.

posted by anib on January 7, 2010 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

well done

posted by Star5_ on January 7, 2010 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

well done

posted by Star5_ on January 7, 2010 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, the key is in how long our positive impact(s) lasts.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 7, 2010 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

The final stanza was superb! It makes great sense to cut one's losses and move forward for greater impact while not losing sight of leaving something valuable behind! sam

posted by sam444 on January 7, 2010 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

 such total wisdom --- my pearls are adding up from you ASH ~  and yes, I will mark this to memory when for the duration ~ El

posted by elysianfields on January 6, 2010 at 7:46 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful and positive indeed! Good conveyance, Ash...
  

posted by LizaM on January 6, 2010 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

An absolutely great poem Ash..though I wonder whether I am a falling star or a sitting stone at times..

posted by shobana on January 6, 2010 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Reassure yourself with this thought...
when you seem to be losing something / someone.

posted by ash_pradhan on January 6, 2010 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply