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Excellent!
posted by
Nita09
on January 12, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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The Soul ~ the Soul lives on --- and yes, mysticism at one point touches the Universe ~ and you've touched me with this 'brilliant' poem...Aba, you're growing and growing. and I'm enjoying. Thank you ~
Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on January 11, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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Troosha
For a poetess of your grace and elegance calling mine one of your 'equals' is to say a lot to someone whose credentials as a poet is not established, let's say, much. Therefore, I take is as a big big compliment, humbly of course.
posted by
anib
on January 11, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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Tzippy
Your enjoyment is totally mine and it is a mutual enjoyment we both revel in. ThAnKs a mucho.
posted by
anib
on January 11, 2010 at 9:30 AM
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abanergee
there are no full stops or commas ... How how I loved this line and may I add that your poetry possesses such grace and elegance.
posted by
Troosha
on January 11, 2010 at 6:16 AM
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incredible work
I enjoyed it much
posted by
Tzippy
on January 11, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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janey
If and when we start appreciating filled with awe and wonder, Nature has so many mysteries to reveal, if only man were to be sensitive, it would be an education of a lifetime books cannot teach. Thanks so much, janey.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 9:08 PM
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Sinome
I am happy that you could enjoy it so, just as much as I loved doing it. Thanks a ton.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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shobana
Shobs, I enjoyed working up the contradictions to find unity, and , in these contradictions so much of our own life stories are embedded ... say, in those that we find no answers. Thanks friend, dost.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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"The dance of life and death" is indeed an incredible act of being - loved your contradictions.
posted by
janey_
on January 10, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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Amazing work my friend... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 10, 2010 at 8:22 PM
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Absolutely stunning abanerjee..I loved the contradictions in the poem..Life and Death, two different aspects of life but then when you live sometimes you can experience death but then in death it's so final - a different dimension. 
posted by
shobana
on January 10, 2010 at 8:22 PM
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PoetRaye
I wished to bring out the similarity, or rather the consonance of man and Nature in the overall cosmic design. We, being a part of Nature, why should be any different? Our death is only of the physical, but definitely not of the essential, that is, the soul, the real we that we are. Thank you so much for finding the sense conveyed in its meaningfulness.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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"Nothing perishes, yet everything survives, the form ever-changing"
I wholeheartedly believe this - Stunning conveyance!
posted by
Katray2
on January 10, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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Nileangel
"So It Is, So It Be, Blessed are We". I could feel the joy in your words and am glad that I could with my humble effort, do so.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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TAPS
Like the bitter cold and the summer, grief and happiness alter but are temporary, in which all of us are woven into the ever-changing tapestry of life. But even the final curtain will come to pass one day for all and subdry (in our bodily form) without fail. But the essence of life, the soul, the real I, or the 'amness', just as in creation, will go on living with the form changed, the essence remaining the same. Thank you so much.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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sam
Thank you so much ma'am.
posted by
anib
on January 10, 2010 at 7:07 PM
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Well done! I liked the portrayal of its mysticism, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 10, 2010 at 5:52 PM
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They just keep coming and going, and somehow I am woven into the ever-changing tapestry of life while moving ever nearer to the final curtain.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 10, 2010 at 2:07 PM
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This is most excellent! So It Is, So It Be, Blessed are We.
posted by
Nileangel
on January 10, 2010 at 12:38 PM
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