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I think the close is very poignant! Sometimes it is just better to sleep on things! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2010 at 4:26 AM
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Corncake
Promises..are sometimes hard to accept when broken but we all make them and I enjoyed yours..Lovely..Fememefeme(FEmia)
posted by
fememefeme
on January 12, 2010 at 7:19 PM
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Corncake
Oh, rest and renew your life yourself. KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 12, 2010 at 5:51 PM
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Loved this..brilliant. Thanks so much for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on January 12, 2010 at 2:31 PM
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LOVELY!!!
This piece is just great.........the flow was perfect!
Mia
posted by
momma_mia
on January 12, 2010 at 1:43 PM
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powerful lines, i liked this
posted by
spiderfly
on January 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM
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Excellent poem... with an interesting aproach to the subject :-)
posted by
Sinome
on January 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM
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