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this is such a beautiful blend of beauty nature and god
that it leaves you speechless
posted by
Tzippy
on January 18, 2010 at 7:23 PM
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Sinome
You are so very special luv, lovely
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 18, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Sinome, imagery so real I felt like I was walking right along with you...
I could feel the cold and sense the hope as the chickadee appeared at poem's end.
...
posted by
Rumor
on January 18, 2010 at 11:16 AM
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that is superb
Even for you this one is wonderful - I love the uplifting end after such bleak imagery. Love it, love love it
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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Very vivid, living imagery --- reaches out and grabs my
~ just stunning Sinome -
xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 17, 2010 at 9:45 PM
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Wonderful
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 17, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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Beautiful
Absolutely Beautiful! This is my favorite among the ones I have read lately.
posted by
Budguy
on January 17, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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that was great!
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 17, 2010 at 5:27 PM
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I feel the power of God's love as well. Such a wonderful feeling it evokes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 17, 2010 at 4:01 PM
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Oh, that was REALLY good! Loved every line and it just got better and
better with a really neat ending!
posted by
Ariala
on January 17, 2010 at 1:25 PM
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HOW WONDERFUL RUGGED UP AND WALKING THROUGH THE SNOW
AT DUSK, YOUR POETRY IS SUPERB
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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WOW ! This is fab !!
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 17, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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