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This is quite real for me since I have been talking about war and military life with my son visiting! I do compliment you on your cliffhangers, you stop at just the right time with a hint of what to expect in the next installment, but that might change for you do keep your reader engaged! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 20, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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Very good. I can see what's going on just from the dialog.
posted by
Pat_B
on January 18, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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That was a close one! You built up the suspense brilliantly.
posted by
elinjo
on January 18, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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