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Re: Thanks Sam, I appreciate that.
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 18, 2010 at 5:11 PM
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Don't sell yourself short; you can write poetry! That was excellent use of refrain and very congruous, too! An awesome ending as well! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 18, 2010 at 4:03 PM
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it certainly makes you think, well done.
posted by
spiderfly
on January 18, 2010 at 11:17 AM
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This is quite the list to reflect on...you gave such good thought ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 18, 2010 at 10:20 AM
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Second thoughts
I think your right on the spot of lifes experiences.Enjoyed reading thoughts..Lv fememefeme(Fema)
posted by
fememefeme
on January 18, 2010 at 9:30 AM
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