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Clever word-play.. seems like you had fun writing this.
posted by
mneme
on January 27, 2010 at 1:48 PM
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Very well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 25, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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This is fine work here ~ what a grand poem - You're a true writer. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 25, 2010 at 6:25 PM
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Very nice work
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 24, 2010 at 6:32 AM
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I agree with Tzippy this so sounds like a song, great job, Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on January 23, 2010 at 3:08 PM
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outstanding work
this should be a hit song. ESPECIALLY for writers it hit home. I read it and it speaks my mind almost completly, except that i loved math, lol but this is the kind of work that i would keep on my computer and from time to time when someone asks me why i write, i would say well mercedes said it best here it is.
posted by
Tzippy
on January 23, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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Outstanding! This is genius work! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 22, 2010 at 6:52 PM
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I love your style. The way you go from one idea to idea is really neat.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2010 at 3:53 PM
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Wonderful
When on as you are so gifted with words they can play a tune as on a piano the melody we hear and to enjoy.. Writing with emotions and feelings.Lv Fememefem(Fema)
posted by
fememefeme
on January 22, 2010 at 9:18 AM
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How creative. I really liked this.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 22, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Poetik
As fluid and melodic as ever, loved it
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 22, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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A right to be heard I think. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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