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Wow, Incredible!
You have some awe inspiring poetry here..
posted by
Katray2
on February 1, 2010 at 8:57 AM
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Aba, I like when I must catch up on your poetry ~ because I can read several of your poems or writings in one sitting...like a 'book' ~
--- and I am so moved by this poetry here. Of Music Divine as unforgettable.
the parallel of the rose and oak ~ amazing imagery - again, the mountains and the desert ~ I feel as if I'm looking at a picture album. All of this as you say, with "dance adorned in God's apparel" --- the sun and its incline and decline ~ most excellent!!! Yes, the Master's flawless --- and you certainly have raised Praise in such awesome stride here. Mark me impressed ~ very -
&
Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on January 27, 2010 at 8:12 PM
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Love the picture you drawn about the beauty of nature
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 24, 2010 at 6:49 AM
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very deep very profound and very well said
this is a very strong message and beautiful poem
posted by
Tzippy
on January 23, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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This is a deep profound read human common shining light!
posted by
Mystereo
on January 23, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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Nature is truly the greatest artist, this reminds me of an old chinese saying: Man was not put here to conquer nature but to live in harmony, may we all hear natures beautiful song and come to the realization that she is a great friend who is in us and us in her. Great write, Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on January 23, 2010 at 2:52 PM
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sam
Yes sam that was exactly how I felt. The moment one inks, he thinks, and God's poetry transcends human thought, so He does not think. He simply does
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2010 at 6:59 PM
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LuciW86
Hi there Luci, most welcome to my blog and here's my
in friendship. That's touching, isn't it? Thank you so much for visiting and it's my pleasure, too.
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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TAPS
I must admit I had great difficulty in bringing it to a logical close although the poem primarily talks about illogic. Many thanks and am glad that you approved it with your liking.
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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This will touch everyone who reads it, as it did me. Thanks.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 22, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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Kabu
Still Nature has a way of balancing itself. Man only thinks he can conquer but he is the vanquished, paying too heavy a price. ThanksKabu.
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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The end was delightful, it is so true that the music of heaven is not on pen and ink, for I believe there are no words! Very strong imagery throughout! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 22, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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I really liked this. There is so much of everything in it and yet it all works together in the end.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 22, 2010 at 8:33 AM
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i LOVE THE ROSE...ROSES ARE MY LOVE
Great words about the beauty and perfection of nature....although I believe that thousands of years of farming has caused much of the desert to flourish.
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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