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Re: great dialogue great pace very readable and I keep wanting more.
Thanks, Kabu. Things will heat up soon.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 24, 2010 at 9:10 PM
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Darson, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I don't think the girls will disappoint you as things unfold.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 24, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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Re: Luci
Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as the ladies let you peek into their lives.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 24, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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Re: Captivating episode !
Thanks! Things will heat up in a minute.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 24, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Re: Great!
Benny's guilt will eat away at him but he might be okay.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 24, 2010 at 8:56 PM
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Great!
I'm following and learning. I wondering what will become of Benny.
posted by
Hackthorne19
on January 24, 2010 at 1:42 PM
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Captivating episode !
posted by
afzal50
on January 24, 2010 at 6:18 AM
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Luci

I like your story-telling, all backed with real-life experience.
posted by
anib
on January 23, 2010 at 8:55 PM
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I knew within the first sentence that I REALLY like your style of writing. It's easy on the eyes, comprehensive, and enjoyable. Thank you! Very refreshing!
posted by
Darson
on January 23, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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great dialogue great pace very readable and I keep wanting more.
posted by
Kabu
on January 23, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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