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I love the way you play with words
it a pleasure to read and fun to figure out, BUT I have no idea how you come up with it. I do know that you are a very deep thinker
posted by
Tzippy
on January 28, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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Another fine poem.. very enjoyable.
posted by
mneme
on January 27, 2010 at 1:46 PM
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: This is cool word play on love,love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 26, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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So creatively written. Loved it.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 26, 2010 at 1:54 PM
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these pennies will never add up to a dime
so ima pocket you because you’re the only one that makes cents in my life.
What a fantastic couplet! It was wonderful all the way through! Bravo, too!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 26, 2010 at 12:36 PM
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Excellent poem!
posted by
Katray2
on January 26, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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I like it...
The allusions, the rhythm, the whole...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 26, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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I can so understand this.
posted by
Straightforward
on January 26, 2010 at 5:14 AM
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Simply astounding and outstanding. I am enjoying your writings. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 25, 2010 at 6:27 PM
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Such positive images that reflect the wonderful person in your life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 25, 2010 at 4:38 PM
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Thank you for visiting me. I love the one on philosophy
and the rhythms of your poetry. They're a chant, a rhyme, thought out and outspoken. Consider me your student.
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 25, 2010 at 1:45 PM
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You have a mind full and whirling. God bless you, this is an excellent poem full of vision and love.
posted by
Justi
on January 25, 2010 at 12:34 PM
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How lovely
This is just a beautifully romantic poem
posted by
lionreign
on January 25, 2010 at 7:43 AM
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Poetik
Nice post my dear, you always seem to hit the right buttons.
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 24, 2010 at 5:32 PM
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VERY WELL WRITTEN.....I DO LIKE YOUR POSTS.
posted by
Kabu
on January 24, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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Determination
The wealth of our pocket change..pennies,a kiss, a dream,,you determined determination. Good write.Lv fema
posted by
fememefeme
on January 24, 2010 at 4:49 PM
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