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This is poignant ... aww touched my heart. ~ Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on February 7, 2010 at 7:03 PM
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Beautiful and thought provoking.
You write so beautifully. I would love to have you come and try my table too.
posted by
skye08
on February 2, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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Hi Marta
Beautiful my friend. Loved addressing the leaf with a 'he' and the tree with a 'she' xoxoxo
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posted by
anib
on February 2, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Capturing how awful sadness feels.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 2, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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Stunning...excellent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 2, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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Sad like that last dry leaf blown fromthe tree and rolling across the snow
blown by the wind.
posted by
Kabu
on February 2, 2010 at 4:04 PM
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Sinome
Sad, like the woodpeceker I saw today, hanging on the side of the feeder, with a look on his face of fatigue in the cold. He looked like he had read this beautifully sad poem luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 2, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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heart break
Is reading your beautiful poem... this is utterly gorgeous and to terribly sad - brilliantly written xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:47 AM
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Sadness
Quite touching, one can almost feel sorry for the tree, nice poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 2, 2010 at 6:01 AM
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Sadness
posted by
C_C_T
on February 2, 2010 at 5:53 AM
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oh, I thought that the birdie came back and that it was good news
- But obviously the sad and the glad are so terribly or well intertwined!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 2, 2010 at 12:32 AM
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good night sinome......
posted by
Star5_
on February 1, 2010 at 10:11 PM
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