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Re: Reads so true! Nice work.

Thanks, Pat. Things are heating up for Lindsey.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good work and style of presentation .

Thanks afzal50. I'm so happy to see you're sticking with the story.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good work and style of presentation .

Thanks afzal50. I'm so happy to see you're sticking with the story.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good work and style of presentation .

Thanks afzal50. I'm so happy to see you're sticking with the story.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I think I'm hooked.

Thank you notapoet for taking the time to write a comment. I had been looking for romance stories for older women but found little to choose from that explored the emotional journies we face. I hope you enjoy the whole story as it progresses.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thanks, Sam. Lindsey has more troubles to face, let's hope she pulls through.

posted by LuciW86 on February 3, 2010 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

It is a most trying situation to get through! I think you spent just right amount of time on it in your story! It averts overkill! sam

posted by sam444 on February 3, 2010 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

I think I'm hooked.

Although romance is not normally my cup of tea, I feel comfortable with your style. I was intrigued enough to go all the way back and read your synopsis and start with chapter one. It will take me a while to catch up since I watch a lot of old movies and often find myself reading several books at the same time. I've been looking for a love story from a woman's point of view that doesn't drive me away with overblown and repetitive descriptions of how emotionally racked the heroine feels. My usual reaction is "show me, don't tell me." So far you have not disappointed.