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It is still a very good poem! I haven't been reading for a couple of days! I had a virus back in October and lost everything on my hard drive! So I have been working for months trying to find and organize my poetry. I did manage to find 561 of them and now have them organized into one folder. A nightmare though! But I ended up with a pretty decent anthology, so there is good in bad! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 7, 2010 at 11:55 PM
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images of illusions or delusions ~ warm and inviting and then non-existent. This is a great poem. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 5, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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I love this poem! I had to come read it again! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 5, 2010 at 12:07 PM
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Corncrake
We don't always understand our thoughts and emotions, but you express them well .BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on February 5, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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Corncrake
A agree with Shelly.. new images.. Lv Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 5, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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Uh-oh! Reminds me of my teenage years, hours waiting for the phone to ring or the postman to call - and he never did!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 5, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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Lovely I think that we all have dreams and emotions that have to wither
and die forthey are born in adid soil. .....or like you say don't lift the table cloth......I just fellover laughing when I read that comment.
posted by
Kabu
on February 5, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on February 5, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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but reasons to prolong this pattern serve no purpose.
I felt emotions that were not true and seek no recompense. Amen! How true this couplet is for me! Well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 5, 2010 at 6:32 AM
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