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sam
Your critically looking at the various aspects and praising, wherever necessary, makes me feel as if I have a personal teacher in you guiding me as one would to a child. I owe this 'ability' in a major way, to you and ely, including Sonome. "illustrative imagery" jelled with "mental aspirations" come together in poetry. Thanx ever so much
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posted by
anib
on February 8, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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The windless night set up the expanse for me! I liked the part about the exploration and its desire. We must seek that which is seemingly beyond what we believe can happen. It must be done on a continuum of hungering and thirsting if we are to make the unthinkable, thinkable! Well done in illustrative imagery in sight but more importantly in mental aspirations! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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janey
Oh, I must so thank you in gratitude for finding "A heaenly delight to read". Many, many thanks for your words in encouragement.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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Troosha
Yes true, how we all prefer nudgets of certainty, be they however small. Just when we think we are reaching, something invaiably happens to subvert it and the entire progress, or promise, is relegated back to square one. Efforts, therefore, is our only hope against hope. Thank you Troosha.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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Straightforward
I am happy to know you found them so. Thank you so much.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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A heavenly delight to read and in the solitude and silence of the night, mankind does stop to ask eternal questions! Well done, once again.
posted by
janey_
on February 7, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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abanergee
Although I was riveted to the piece - rich and inviting - the close left me sad as it left me
couched in doubt. (I prefer certainty even if it comes only in small nuggets....
) Well done, my friend!
posted by
Troosha
on February 7, 2010 at 7:00 AM
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Very profound metaphors here, abanerjee
posted by
Straightforward
on February 7, 2010 at 4:37 AM
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Darson
I am indebted to you for reading each line twice over to get the import of the message as I intended it to. Thanks no end for such effusive appreciation which makes my efforts worthwhile and motivates me to do better. I am so very happy that someone of your stature should be so impressed, and I accept this honor most humbly. Know also that my feelings for you is inclusive of one in reciprocation. I admire your writings. Mucho thanks therefore.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 3:49 AM
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shobana
O shobs, you too are my delight, and I am glad you noticed the title. I too thought it to be meaningful and it sounds good, doesn't it? Thanks many times over.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 3:41 AM
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elysianfields
So sweet of you to say if I say the wind and the stars, speak of such then you will believe, and it is good to be reading my gift, I am on fire, a bard, as you said in another comment ~ so many gifts I am blessed with, touches my heart
. Thanx a ton, ma'am, and I am honored, which I accept in all humility. It was you who was instrumental in motivating me to write poetry and I am glad that I did.
~ Aba. Have you seen the
I sent you earlier?
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 3:39 AM
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Abanerjee - a beautiful piece of work and I love the title..
posted by
shobana
on February 7, 2010 at 2:40 AM
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Kabu
Many, many thanks for your very sweet comment in appreciation, and it is immensely satisfying to know that my work is so well liked by one and all. But it does take a lot of time, in fact, more than what I used to take when I was writing prose. I am not a natural poet but I am enjoying
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2010 at 1:58 AM
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Honestly, you write THE most thought inspiring poetry. I read each line twice, to make sure I am absorbing it as I should. You are without a doubt a very intellectual and intelligent individual.
posted by
Darson
on February 6, 2010 at 8:16 PM
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Aba, if you say the wind and the stars, speak of such then I will believe.
~ this is a stunning portrayal of imagery and power - wisdom once again, written in. You are on fire with your poetry writing Aba and I am enjoying it. It's good to be reading your gift. Ely
(oh and just for your information...I couldn't find things here from Bhaskar either; but in a bit of research he had a list of articles on this link:
http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/106446/bhaskar_banerjee.html)
posted by
elysianfields
on February 6, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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Such depth of thought you have written into this poem. The universe is
beyond my ability to comprehend...and why this small planet is chosen for life?
I think I shall stick to.........
Twinkle Twinkle little star
How I wonder what you are.......LOL a WONDERFUL PEACE OF WORK MY FRIEND.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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