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Wow, talk about a 'crush' ~ how sweet this poem truly - speaking of immature emotions and so humbly and then at the end the wisdom flows --- concisely. You're a great poet in the making here Aba. Certainly making one ponder and inspiring with each you pen. Write on~ it's to our delight. Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on February 11, 2010 at 2:13 PM
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Re: sam
You're welcome and welcome! Your progress is sensational! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2010 at 6:17 AM
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sam
It has been your appreciation and inspiration that turned and tuned me to transition from prose to poetry quickly, so thanksthanks&thanks.
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anib
on February 11, 2010 at 6:14 AM
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Sinome
The content and the tentatative words wording comes from my really having lived the experience. She creates a flutter even to this day.Thank you and xoxox
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anib
on February 11, 2010 at 6:08 AM
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A wonderful poem steeped in exquisite imagery! I continue to marvel at this new found love of yours and how well you have transition from prose to terse composing! I say kudos all the day long! sam
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sam444
on February 10, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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Wow... I loved this poem... it felt almost as if I were watching a childs dabbling into the adult standing by the window of time but on the other side of the glass. Truly amazing, from its content to the tentative wording it was absolutely perfect! Bravo! xoxoxo
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Sinome
on February 10, 2010 at 9:45 AM
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