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BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS, I AM GLAD YOU ARE STILL HERE
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 14, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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I hope your day was special.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 14, 2010 at 6:07 PM
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Wow! Glad I checked in...knocka my socks off...like a glimpse of the known but unseen. The stage, actors, dancing within time and space, as if the outer form of the poem were the relection within a pond and a pebble were dropped in. Not a still life, but movement thru simmering images, as if a membrane to another universe while remaing completely concrete. Also sructurally compact from title to last line--that each line is concise and endemnic to the whole. Most of all, I liked being transported thru a voice to my own epemereal experice of freedom.
Other that that, it seems to me an ok poem. xie-o, john
posted by
jfm32
on February 14, 2010 at 9:59 AM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on February 14, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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and those that we dont see rule our dreams
how true is that, beautiful poem and wonderfully put
happy valentines day :)
posted by
Tzippy
on February 13, 2010 at 11:07 PM
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Nicemares
Y How haunting and yet comforting at the same time love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on February 13, 2010 at 9:13 PM
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Really nice poem. Happy Valentines Day
posted by
mariposa75
on February 13, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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Sinome
Happy Valentine's day luv
from W & K
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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I would like to wish you a Happy Valentine's Day as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 13, 2010 at 4:59 PM
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Happy Valentine dear one.....what fun to read of summer heat when it is
snowing outside.
posted by
Kabu
on February 13, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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What lovely words
you have expressed here. Hope all of your days are filled with love
posted by
malcolm
on February 13, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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Wow, I had forgotten there were such things as hot summer nights. LOL
Now that you mention it, I've had a few where I wished for a little snow to cool off the air.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 13, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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Life's Stage
Wonderful and Happy Valenting with Love and hugs. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 13, 2010 at 8:14 AM
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Comment on Life's stage
"Aye! The play's the thing!" Some obscure playright's lines that you have apprently deciphered. In other words: Classic.
joab
posted by
joab3
on February 13, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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happy v day to you!
posted by
Star5_
on February 12, 2010 at 10:27 PM
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