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Azur
I loved this Azur. You are definitely rallying - slowly is great, and you had me laughing with 'copyrighted to me,
' Now - if the girl's name is Peg you are going to have a lot trouble finding a title.
posted by
johnmacnab
on March 5, 2010 at 3:49 PM
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I liked how the seemingly mundane turns to a creative outlet! I liked how the garden will grow for it can be symbolic in more than one aspect of this poem! I wondered why you did not get a response as well. They probably never hung laundry before and it may have been quite foreign! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 3, 2010 at 1:08 PM
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Azur
There's a lot in here, good imagery and hope for the better in the new season. My best, sir. BC-A, Bill's Roost
posted by
BC-A
on March 1, 2010 at 9:56 PM
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Azur
A nice read and it's good to read you....
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 1, 2010 at 8:06 PM
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Azur ~ what neat piece of writing here - I see the 'red' (a warm
color) and I see this
"and washed many times
fine
lacy things, " and giggle ~~~ how often I wash my fine linens, until I finally decide to go get a new batch of fine linens? 
The red is warm and loving and the abstract art you project by using the 'pegs' is so perfectly popped in this whole canvas of ART ~ sheer art. I love this, Azur - rest - and write when you can. I so enjoy it. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 1, 2010 at 2:42 PM
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Ready for the season to change
posted by
StrickGold
on March 1, 2010 at 1:37 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 1, 2010 at 10:33 AM
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posted by
Amanda__
on March 1, 2010 at 6:33 AM
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Sounds like you've come to the pause for seasonal change
a few more minutes of morning and afternoon, a promise of spring. that's part of it, I think, the lassitude and utter weariness just before the urge to clean house.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 1, 2010 at 4:46 AM
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Absolutely fine for you to feel that way..and the poem was just great. It's nice to read and take things slow sometimes. I do that too. thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 1, 2010 at 1:02 AM
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very lovely. xoxo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 28, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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Great imagery, Azur! I read it twice and enjoyed the effect
Random 'things' can be artistic indeed! Hope you are able to rest more and feel better.
posted by
Katray2
on February 28, 2010 at 8:31 PM
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well your dear delightful humour is still intact
Now while here everything is white with snow and the trees leafless and brown...a garden of bright pegs sounds rather fun. Get well soon darling.
posted by
Kabu
on February 28, 2010 at 6:29 PM
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