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Nothing like meeting one's match to stir a bit of reality! GREAT read, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 6, 2010 at 6:41 AM
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I enjoyed this so much...got me giggling too. Thanks so much for your visit and as usual lovely comment Corncrake.
posted by
shobana
on March 3, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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Matilda part 2
Oh! How the soul is moved with the spirit of Rum and the mind playing out the story to be told for Old Ned..Oh! Matilda. Blessings Fema
I've been away for a few days going to the Dr. and next week I'll be gone for a week with procedures at the hospital and specialists. I submitted a few words I wrote a story poem and hoping to have it published but my health comes first so I bid you goodnigh till tomorrow.Blessing MB Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on March 3, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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Ah, thank you for letting me know of "mincers" ~ and yes, me thinks Ned has been rummed. This is something else - the descriptive quality is so prolific that I race to each line to see another one and then I must read again (sometimes again and again) because it seems there's more to the write than one could wrestle from a single read. E.L.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 3, 2010 at 9:22 AM
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Ned could never understand
What happened when he took a swig
Suddenly he felt his hand
Was held by something very big.
THIS PRETTY MUCH SAYS IT ALL FOR POOR OLD NED
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 3, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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I think that along with all my Gnomes....Ned has been into the rum.
posted by
Kabu
on March 3, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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