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It is a great write! Very well done to capture the emotions of the voices! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2010 at 3:46 AM
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Clover
Very evocative. "The rub of khaki" and "The scud of cotton" are especially fine . You really get a lot of work out of your words!
posted by
2902
on March 10, 2010 at 3:26 AM
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Picturesque, dear friend, picturesque
posted by
Straightforward
on March 10, 2010 at 12:38 AM
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Corncracke
This is profound, so visual, so sad, so real. You are a tremendous poet. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on March 9, 2010 at 7:56 PM
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Excellently written Corncrake capturing both their emotions. Thanks so much for your visit and I really liked this poem.
posted by
shobana
on March 9, 2010 at 3:30 PM
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Iam back in the years of war ..love before the slaughter.
Wiley and I read your poems toeach other and discuss them.
posted by
Kabu
on March 9, 2010 at 11:54 AM
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