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U have a new fan! most excellent! what a gift
posted by
manawar
on March 15, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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I watch as visions of times gone by become visions of changed tomorrow's,
Simply and marvelously beautiful and rich ~ such great depth in your poetry. Missed you Sinome and enjoyed reading this tonight. I have much to catch up on but, enjoyed this before I say Goodnight. Elyse xoxox 
posted by
elysianfields
on March 12, 2010 at 9:09 PM
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Visions of time gone by come to me more and more,
while those of the future seem not to vie for attention as they once did.
I love your writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 12, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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AH SINOME DARLING...YOU HAVE GOT INSIDE OUR HEADS
Wiley nd I try so hard to put certain family issues away fromus...but they have this horrid habit of returning in our dreams.
posted by
Kabu
on March 12, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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Sinome
What a fantastic start! ~
It will be dark soon, dark enough to dream and see the dream unfold and come to life;
there also is such a organic unity o thoughts. This is marvelous, Can I keep a copy, Marta? xoxoxo -:)
posted by
anib
on March 12, 2010 at 4:05 PM
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This one is really touching my soul.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 12, 2010 at 2:53 PM
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Re:
that was my favorite part also. I can relate.
posted by
manhatyork
on March 12, 2010 at 11:51 AM
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awesome, awesome, awesome. drew me in from start to middle to end :)
posted by
manhatyork
on March 12, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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for this is life's stage
where things that are, seem not to be
and those that we don't see
rule our dreams...
GREAT POEM, GREAT ENDING, SWEET DREAMS, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 12, 2010 at 10:45 AM
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here of late I have had a lot of dreams, and darn the good ones I forget
posted by
Lanetay
on March 12, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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Love the imagery in this and enjoyed this line, especially:
when time and space and love shall do their dance 
posted by
Ariala
on March 12, 2010 at 8:29 AM
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