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Sinome
Very well done, but what a difference from your love poems! This has an almost omninous quality about it...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 17, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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War has ruined many a life...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 17, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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Sinome, I was reading on a few passages last night from writers on a military healing site and this reminded me of what one wrote, "
What the sword has cut open, the pen has been proven to heal" --- Your poetry helps heal ~ and the wounds of war seemingly, with hope as well. Lovely poem ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 17, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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OH I LOVED READING THIS, IN PLAIN VIEW FOR ALL TO SEE
AND WHAT A GREAT ENDING
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 17, 2010 at 9:00 AM
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Brilliant!
posted by
Nita09
on March 17, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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this is so very poignant
but so beautifully written... well done sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on March 17, 2010 at 8:08 AM
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Very cool work, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 16, 2010 at 9:23 PM
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Sinome
Grand imagery, my friend, Nature's intervention in taking away innocenece, to renew xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on March 16, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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Oh Sinome this is heart rending....I feel like a child watching my life
change forever.
posted by
Kabu
on March 16, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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Great imagery here Sinome and your title is so apt. Thank you for your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 16, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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