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Even more stunning when there is knowledge of where the words
were born...oustanding illustration, my friend...absolutely top form. -Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 24, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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...sometimes, yes sometimes, I feel you reaching into the stratasphere...
posted by
jfm32
on March 24, 2010 at 4:57 PM
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I love this one... both the tale and the poem are filled with heart kissed charm. Wonderful work sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on March 24, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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smile
So you tell it as it is Simone, you stand so close to your work and everything feels real. One cannot feel help but feel sorry for the woman. The artist just seeking perfection.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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l A dreamy foretelling panorama of imagery and passion love. BC–A, Bill’s RTTst
posted by
BC-A
on March 23, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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...........continued .........
for my keep, just like that painting.
posted by
anib
on March 23, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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It most certainly is one of your most brilliant poems Sinome and so captivating it is. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 23, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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You have made my day, dearest Marta
I must say ~ this is one of your most brilliant poems ... in fact, as far as I am concerned, the topmost. I was so totally lost in the story, he ~ absobed ... she, worried, occasionally stopping for lovemaking, seeing the shine of the blue seas in her honey-colored eyes, finally making her nude painting, not for sale - and when he fell sick, no longer the painter now, she, helpless, having to sell the painting to pay for his care, and with closed eyes, remembering, the smile coming back. This is like a real-life story, so toching that it wet my eyes. Superb, Sinome. Once again if I may ask you to let it up for my keeps. xoxoxo
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posted by
anib
on March 23, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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I think a memory of one's smile is the last thing to go...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 23, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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WOW IS THE WORD....VERY POWERFUL WRITING
This is so special full of love bursting with love total devotionto love and to art.Priceless.
posted by
Kabu
on March 23, 2010 at 4:05 PM
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Wow!! such a wonderful poem
and a wonderful imagery too. I really enjoy reading it. Keep on the good work. Regards, chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 23, 2010 at 3:59 PM
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