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SWEET....
sometimes..when I find myself at odds with the world, i strike off alone and do the very thing you wrote about. And come back to the REAL world feeling better. Thanx for writing my feelings. Feel better just reading it. Ray
posted by
Raysongs
on March 29, 2010 at 10:35 PM
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The forest is the perfect setting for this!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 29, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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"for you are the forest and the forest is you.....:"
do you have any idea how powerful those words are, and how true. I have come to realize in the last few months the truth of us becoming one with the universe is part of our initiation into the world of the invisible. Did you even have a clue how amazingly accurate you are in the invisible world of truth?
posted by
Tzippy
on March 29, 2010 at 4:56 PM
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I've been catching up...so much great writing and descriptions! Keep
up the great work!
posted by
Ariala
on March 29, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Wow... I want to go try that now
this poem really brings you into the event and helps you to live the moment. Loved it! xoxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on March 29, 2010 at 6:37 AM
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enlightenment
To enter this poem is to become a part of it and to believe in it
posted by
C_C_T
on March 29, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Sinome
I love the use of the senses in this visual sensation love. YZBC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 28, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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It's an awesome feeling...becoming one with the things around us.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 28, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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It is a gorgeous imagery Sinome..just lovely peace you portray in this.
posted by
shobana
on March 28, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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My beautiful Sinomewriting beauty and sereity again. Just love you.
posted by
Kabu
on March 28, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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Sinome
You really deliver love and peace in the most beautiful imagery luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 28, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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Wow, Sinome this is sooo serene...
one of my favorites is to walk in the woods and do just that and, if I'm with someone, more :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 28, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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That was refreshing, I really needed that! The clarity and simplicity of purpose cleansed my mind of all the nonsense daily struggles that I have been stressing about.
posted by
calia14
on March 28, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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I beleive being in a surrounding of tall trees can calm you
posted by
Lanetay
on March 28, 2010 at 5:37 PM
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