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there are no words to do justice to the beauty of this poem
Beautiful
posted by
skye08
on April 6, 2010 at 12:58 PM
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Souls completed
I guess one would like to achieve this gracious completed sense of togetherness. So tenderly observed with a wistful feeling of need.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 6, 2010 at 3:18 AM
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very touching
you paint a picture with many intricate and beautiful details.
posted by
Tzippy
on April 5, 2010 at 10:39 PM
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Seeing other couples has made me feel like that as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 5, 2010 at 5:02 PM
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this is very lovely... sigh
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 5, 2010 at 2:51 PM
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Yes, to grow old in Love is a beautiful life. Sinome, what a grace-filled moment you captured... Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 5, 2010 at 11:26 AM
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ahhh to only have love like that
posted by
Lanetay
on April 5, 2010 at 10:03 AM
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Beautiful perspective
Long-standing love can be a beautiful thing to see and you captured that moment gorgeously xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 5, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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where fairy tales exist there is dreamin........
posted by
spiderfly
on April 5, 2010 at 5:46 AM
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sweetness stand out, gives depth & texture to your poem. LOVE IT!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 5, 2010 at 5:04 AM
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infer from the setting untold roughpatches, heartbreaks, betrayals. makes the
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 5, 2010 at 5:01 AM
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sinome, this is my favorite style of poetry, so easy to tell & read. but i
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 5, 2010 at 4:58 AM
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e J Like walking on a timeline past real people in real life. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 5, 2010 at 4:42 AM
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