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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AS USUAL, WALK ON THRU THE STORM, THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR HEART
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 7, 2010 at 8:25 AM
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Sometimes this emptiness is contentment. Such vivid imagery.
posted by
shamasehar
on April 6, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful word felicity and imagery. It was as if you took me for a walk xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on April 6, 2010 at 9:21 PM
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Beautiful as usual Sinome. Thanks so much for visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on April 6, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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Rain and Day
{ It was the same here. Unusually it rainedin one town on the bus route and the sun was out in the town where I work love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 6, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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So many would love to reach that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 6, 2010 at 6:26 PM
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Well done, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 6, 2010 at 3:23 PM
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Sometimes that is all we can do is walk
posted by
skye08
on April 6, 2010 at 12:55 PM
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calm and lovely as always
posted by
spiderfly
on April 6, 2010 at 12:46 PM
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such passion mixed with sadness adds even more depth ~ I enjoyed my walk with you. xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 6, 2010 at 11:05 AM
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Melancholic
but beauty expressed in every step
posted by
malcolm
on April 6, 2010 at 10:32 AM
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Contentment
One can get conditioned to anything after a while and it feels like here that you are accepting the pain and all that is beautiful is something that you walk through. I know this is probably not what you thought and I could scream myself sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 6, 2010 at 9:39 AM
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Beautiful and calming and melancholy.
posted by
calia14
on April 6, 2010 at 9:22 AM
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I need these poems of yours to calm my soul and contemplate other things than writing like crazy and seeking fame. Letterman, he? Better than Ophrah, though. Love you.
posted by
vogue
on April 6, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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I THINK WE MAY HAVE RAIN COMING IN HERE.THANK YOU FOR BEING SUCH
A LOVING DARLING. YOU ARE VERY SPECIAL TO US.
posted by
Kabu
on April 6, 2010 at 7:13 AM
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That is so vivid
I love the dynamic scene moving into the almost trance like stillness - beautifully done xoxoxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on April 6, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Y This is both a beautiful word painting and psychological wonder. It displays texture in imagery and passion love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 6, 2010 at 4:55 AM
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