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Re: dsm
That's KINGMI......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on April 9, 2010 at 11:27 AM
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dsm
I'm guessing you mean the third sentence, since the second is just fine. Have you not been on Blogit long? That is far, far from being the worst. I knew it was awkward when I wrote it, but I didn't feel like editing last night as it had been a long evening.
posted by
kooka_lives
on April 9, 2010 at 11:03 AM
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abstinence only has always been a pipe dream -- religious hallucination
ask priests & nuns
posted by
Xeno-x
on April 9, 2010 at 6:15 AM
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kooka_lives. All due respect, check your 2nd full sentence...
Would that be three split infinitives, a dangling participal and comma splices? Or the best trainwreck runaway run-on sentence in history. Really?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 8, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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