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Nicely done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 22, 2010 at 5:23 PM
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the touch of fire came through!! wonderfully written!
posted by
Ariala
on April 18, 2010 at 3:34 PM
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Touching is such an important part of loving. But, when touching is not possible,
"Love is like a beautiful flower which I may not touch, but whose fragrance makes the garden a place of delight just the same." (Helen Keller)
posted by
TAPS.
on April 18, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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I can feel the heat coming from the monitor
posted by
Lanetay
on April 18, 2010 at 8:59 AM
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How passionate, absolutely thrilling Sinome. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on April 18, 2010 at 2:05 AM
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Wow Sinome
Love and passion, sometimes separate in longing, sometimes migling with the two hearts in one rhythm and in passion and sigh, this remaing only as a yearning. Beautifully evocative. xoxoxo - :)
posted by
anib
on April 18, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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Touch you
Yes you express this feeling beautifully Simone probably more widespread than anyone realizes, life does not just abandon its responsibilities. One adapts or withers.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 17, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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OMG SUCH TEASING PASSION....ITHINK I'LL JOIN NAUT AND HAVE A DRINK
posted by
Kabu
on April 17, 2010 at 9:49 PM
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Simone
H You can write the way you want love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 17, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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Sinome
After this I need a cold shower or a scotch - I think I'll go for the scotch...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 17, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Sinome
Phewie...........It was cold up here 'til you wandered by outside with your notebook .........
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 17, 2010 at 6:12 PM
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wow
that brought out goose bumps....have to take a blood pressure pill now !
posted by
Raysongs
on April 17, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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So much pain for the speaker as that someone does not look to be in the cards.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 17, 2010 at 4:42 PM
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SINOME
Is it me, or is it a little warm in here? Beautiful
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 17, 2010 at 4:03 PM
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wow, my heart skipped a beat while reading this beautiful poem. xoxo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 17, 2010 at 3:43 PM
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Hi sweet lady, I have missed you. Cool down now it is summer time you don't want to overheat. xoxoxoxo
posted by
Justi
on April 17, 2010 at 3:26 PM
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Sinome, Whoo! Nice job...
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 17, 2010 at 12:55 PM
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