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So very lovely
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on April 22, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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Excellent, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 22, 2010 at 5:19 PM
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Every single one of us has something to offer the world.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 22, 2010 at 5:12 PM
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Sinome
This could have read 'human' I think, it's even left me sad for a failure at one of life's most cherished ideals, that of a first marriage
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 22, 2010 at 12:22 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, and it awkens memories of my own. I was twelve, and I was in love...but she was fourteen and unattainablye, completely beyond my reach...but I did kiss her once, sort of, at an unguarded moment, and she laughed...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 22, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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Yes I remember him like it was yestrday but its been 48 years, thats a long time for that kind of memory
But then again there have been a lot that followed
posted by
Lanetay
on April 22, 2010 at 8:59 AM
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Wonderful
I love the thought and the imagery, both - great work sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 22, 2010 at 7:35 AM
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This is so true and poignant; I never cease to wonder at and admire your talent. Thanks ever so much for your kind comment--I do hope you visit us some day--will take you to all these places! I'll put some slides of the jungle on associated content (you know how slow I am!) but if you like elephants, there are 3 sets of slides and an article on Dubare elephant camp at
http://www.associatedcontent.com/user/443716/nita_mukherjee.html
posted by
Nita09
on April 22, 2010 at 2:32 AM
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Hi Marta
"Our past has yet bot passed", just loved this line. I agree women are delicate and sensitive and tender in every sense of the word, but the strength too in her is something men cannot match. All these aside, this is indeed a very fragrant yet poignant poem, coming from as beautiful qa heart as yours. Kudos! xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on April 22, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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passed
Another sad beautiful poem Simone to write is to heal
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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Sinome - It does hold true especially in a woman to think about and write of sometimes that being a beautiful experience. Just beautifully said and thanks so much for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 21, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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Dear Marta/Sinome ~ I find such truth in this. It's amazing how much the heart can hold, I find. This brought back some nostalgic and fond memories for me. You're such a tender, dear heart xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 21, 2010 at 9:59 PM
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