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CORNCRAKE
Still enjoying this creation my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 25, 2010 at 10:23 AM
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Re: Forever
Hi Shobana, I didn't know if I should post it, but you know how it is one presses the button and shivers. I had a look at your roses on the net, do yours have prickly branches? Ideal for a hedge I would imagine. So you have to look at these in the morning and hold the impression when you feel a bit unpoetical. What are all these colors swirling around in my mind. Take it easy
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 4:07 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Bill, I was brought up in the age of death and innocence.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 3:54 AM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 3:51 AM
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Re: E.E.
I don't really like writing sad poems E.E. but life is sad sometimes and we can't do much about it.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 3:50 AM
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CC - The last verse in "Forever" was just sensational and full of meaning. Loved both as always.
posted by
shobana
on April 25, 2010 at 1:25 AM
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Excellent!!! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 24, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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CORNCAKE
v Oh Eysie explains the man in the first. Literally he was an angel not a transvestite. That would be another story. For the second you might like a St Patricks Day church dinner with an Irish brand beer. If you’d go to an Oktoberfest dinner in the fellowship hall you get Oktoberfest or another German beer sir. In any event enjoy. I’m too out of it to go to church myself. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 24, 2010 at 3:25 PM
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The Angel and the girl : and so there was a Guardian Angel supporting the girl along (the) a path ~
Forever - (I like that phrase: I suppose we are in his supermarket) and hoping for sunshine : as we need our omens ~ I nodded with this line - as birdsong ... This is a powerful, good write CC - I nodded often with this piece of yours. Ah but this one touched my 'soul' ~ EE

posted by
elysianfields
on April 24, 2010 at 2:31 PM
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