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The rain seems to be the same everywhere Sinome and most probably we are being wet by the same rain too. Just such beautiful poetry you write. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 27, 2010 at 8:23 PM
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Those three magic words at the end add so much to the poem and bring out the sting of the significant other not being there even more.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 27, 2010 at 5:40 PM
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Simone
I’m impressed that you find good and condolences in the rain love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 27, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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yes, this is lovely --- soothing, cleansing rain and the heart of yours is so full...xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 27, 2010 at 7:53 AM
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Beautiful poem on a beautiful thought
the imagery is superb, thank you for sharing this xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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I can see myself in your words.. Yeah, a connection with the rain...
posted by
Syracuse_Pike
on April 27, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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makes me want to go play in the rain ...
posted by
Raysongs
on April 26, 2010 at 9:48 PM
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