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I feel a sense of being haunted while reading this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 1, 2010 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Cool......

posted by TIMMYTALES on April 30, 2010 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

 Reminds me of The Land of Nod ~ this is superb writing Sinome ~ xoxoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 30, 2010 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Wow
this is so rich and exciting...I can't wait to go to sleep now! xoxoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on April 30, 2010 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

I loved it Sinome, the promise of a beautiful night. Thanks for the visit and it was just imagery Sinome. I wrote this poem with an "I" lol. But you know love always gets a person shy..

posted by shobana on April 29, 2010 at 11:55 PM | link to this | reply

Dark soon
Hush! I don't mean to wake you Simone so I am pressing the keys softly. To enter your dream is to wish to do the same, to look into the future for comfort and to confirm that it exists. 

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2010 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

Simone

j There’s always more for us beyond our minds love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on April 29, 2010 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply