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Re: I am trying to figure out a better last line --
Thanks Wind Tapper, I know the last line could do with better meter, only that the suggestions you are giving seem to go with the competitive perspective of blogging as reflected in the previous stanza. More suggestions welcome
posted by
Straightforward
on May 12, 2010 at 3:05 AM
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I am trying to figure out a better last line --
one that has the proper meter and tone, etc.
How about, "Trying to win the human race"? "Tries to win the Human Race"? "Flies to win the human race"?
"Spins to win the human race"?
Don't mind me.... 
posted by
WindTapper
on May 12, 2010 at 1:22 AM
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There is a lot of chatter out in cyberspace. And the coffee shops are full of people..... with their
Laptops too. LOL!
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 11, 2010 at 10:26 PM
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I wonder what Jane Taylor would say to that.
Actually, I wonder what she would think about blogging.
Times have certainly changed things.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 8, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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Straightforward
So familiar yet so different. That's what I call creativity.
posted by
anib
on May 8, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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I like it
too!
posted by
KaBooM62
on May 5, 2010 at 7:55 PM
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I like it
it inspired thoughts and smiles both
posted by
lionreign
on May 5, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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straightforward and cute
posted by
clarerichard
on May 5, 2010 at 5:09 AM
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;lol, very cute
posted by
Tzippy
on May 4, 2010 at 8:01 PM
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Imaginatively cute! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 2, 2010 at 1:48 PM
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Good one, Straight... Got my cogs turning - and my thoughts as well -
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2010 at 1:01 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on May 2, 2010 at 7:38 AM
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Some interesting takes on the blogging.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 1, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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Well done! What an awesome spin! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2010 at 4:28 AM
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