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Ouch for Mabel or is the other way around! Great contemplative poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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Waves changing day to day - minute to minute sometimes is something I can relate too ~CC, Sometimes - I feel anytime --- if not cast in stone, we can 'change our minds' - and even then who's to say...This leaves me with 'reflection' (pondering...) -- and for Mabel - well I do hope she would 'understand' Truth - E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone, the day is a little brighter.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: Shobana
Shobana if you could describe a lovey-dovey situation without laughing. Does it feel warm or exciting like holding a white dove in one's hands and releasing it to the sky. I don't think Mabel will speak to me after this. Time for my medication.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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You are too hard on yourself CC... You seem to have found yourself already... Rerad your poems :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Bill I think that search was doomed from the start.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2010 at 7:20 AM
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Oh dear CC..the daughter?? Poor Mabel. I think what you have written is a predicament shared by many..especially me..lol. But then sometimes yesterday's doing/undoing make for todays undoing/doing.
Thanks so much for the visit CC and you know how I just think of a lovey-dovey situation to write a poem..
posted by
shobana
on May 2, 2010 at 1:57 AM
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CORNCAKE
C It comes across as you have your own time warp. You fill it with your originative lines of poetry. They tell where you’re at. I guess that you find yourself by writing poems sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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