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I am captivated by yours spirits... I've yet to decide on who they are? Do he love? Does she hate? Is it simply a game in wait? Intriguing.
posted by
PinkWeaver
on May 6, 2010 at 10:48 AM
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Corncrake-MB
I love the carpenter as I thought of the trade our Lord had. A builder of lives and ours with some turmoil for those and happiness for others..I love reading your story.
Blessings MB Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 6, 2010 at 9:40 AM
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Re: Taps
I expect she loved her husband Taps, but no one else. I have known men heartbroken and yet marry again within six months, so I don't really know what to think. Thank you for your comment, I expect you are right.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Re: Hi Shobana
When you think of it Shobana we have a wealth of memories which can be fashioned into poetry, if only to show that we have lived through that time and your little choo choo train runs on eternally. Thank you, be happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE Wiley
No Wiley I somehow don't think he has the knack, whatever that is.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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Re: So many adults forget that children have feelings and needs...they also for
You have got it in one Kabu, but one can't change personalities, one can accept them and when they are torn in half they destroy themselves.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:29 AM
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Re: E.E.
Well we didn't wear long uns until we began to look the odd one out, I remember my first pair blue and shapeless, what a problem adolescence and what comes after isn't much better.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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Re: Sam
Just trying out a simpler structure Sam to save time
But one still needs fallbackons.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:20 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Thank you Bill life has its little problems.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Re: this is a great poem, i loved it
The truth helps sometimes Tzippy Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 7:16 AM
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this is a great poem, i loved it
posted by
Tzippy
on May 6, 2010 at 6:43 AM
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CORNCAKE
v I love the childhood tale like my father used to tell. And then the boy grows to need love. You write neat poetry sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 5, 2010 at 8:16 PM
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I really liked how you fashioned the imagery in the Carpenter! Well done and kudos!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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CC - That's one of those bugger memories...ah that is wrong but, you know what it will 'rust' those treasures. or did. Greed and ugly was the color. Such a lesson (for one that wore shorts) to learn at a young age. Taught you early in life of 'life' and of selfishness. Tugs at my heart for that little boy.
and for Spirits...I like She - sending the message, it's not at all about the 'flesh' ~ of the soul, He should know. She's brill and he's trying...E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on May 5, 2010 at 7:06 PM
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So many adults forget that children have feelings and needs...they also for
forget that they grow up and can have long memories.
Your Spirit poem amused me....he never seems to get far with the sweet talk.
posted by
Kabu
on May 5, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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I loved the carpentar CC. Made me think of someone I am close to in a spiritual way. It shows of humility and pride and self worth. Now he is cute..Thanks for your visit CC. Glad you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on May 5, 2010 at 2:44 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I liked your He and She, don't think it turned out well though.LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 5, 2010 at 2:16 PM
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What an image your carpenter poem has made for me. I want to kick the widow in the seat of her pants, but she must already be hurting so to not see what a good thing she could have done.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 5, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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