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Quite the reminder the rain serves as.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 22, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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beautiful piece of work, easy
to read, plainly explained, and once you read the first line you cant stop reading, great job.
posted by
Tzippy
on May 22, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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sounds so melancholic :)
i love rainy days! 
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 21, 2010 at 5:48 PM
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beautiful so beautiful
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 21, 2010 at 5:11 PM
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I love this and it reminds me of myself
posted by
Lanetay
on May 21, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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beautifully tragic
or, perhaps, tragically beautiful either way this is wonderful work sweetie xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on May 21, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Simone
Simone Supposing he had pulled you into his arms and whispered love into your heart and then left. Sometimes one has to just try and wipe the tears away, because there is just no answer.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 21, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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We can have thousands of memories,
but we seem to remember the rainy ones more often. The rain adds an intensity, rather it be mellow-dramatic, or carefree and barefoot. Just try to remember the happy rainy days, too! Loved it, .....Ray
posted by
Raysongs
on May 20, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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sinome, many lost loved ones remembered ~ when it rains. Excellent!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 20, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Such lovely emotions you invoke with this poem Sinome. Excellent. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on May 20, 2010 at 10:41 PM
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Sinome
R Rain brings its own emotion. Songs have caught the fun and melancholy of it. The problem’s that when it rains it adds to feelings good or bad love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2010 at 10:06 PM
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