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Excellently written yellowrose - loved the whole imagery. Thanks so much for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on May 23, 2010 at 5:22 AM
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yellowrose
This is nothing short of a classic. Believe me, the depth, the cadence, the imagery, the alliteration, and the sense of the poem in pithy lines all makes it BRILLIANT. Exceptionally well done, yellowrose.
posted by
anib
on May 22, 2010 at 11:43 PM
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Floating
Well it's different Vicky and interesting, thank you for your visit
posted by
C_C_T
on May 22, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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there is a lot going on in your mind
posted by
Lanetay
on May 22, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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Very raw emotions in this great poem Vicki... one is never alone if one has faith... that lacing of light might be what keeps one from sinking into the darkness of the deep... hold on to it sweetie... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 22, 2010 at 9:36 PM
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laced with light..... I love that
You are never alone.....but sometimes we think we are
this is a great poem , touching and laced with love, deep as the ocean and a pleasure to read.
posted by
Tzippy
on May 22, 2010 at 9:10 PM
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That some fine imagery and poignant realization! But hoping someone will pass by may be wishful thinking and the reason the bed is as it is! Nice imagery nonetheless! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2010 at 5:58 PM
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