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Re: spiderfly
Thank you spiderfly, sorry to be so flabby I just can't remember how it ended, poem fatigue I expect or old age
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 9:15 AM
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Re: I wouldn't say cement....more like marshmallow but the image of abrasive
Well we all know women like that Kabu, but we must forgive them. I think. Although it is a job to do that if one was very young at the time. I don't mean Mother. Thank you dear for your comment.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 9:07 AM
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Re: Shobana
thank you Shobana I think I was in a sad mood when I wrote this
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam just reflections
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 8:58 AM
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Touche! I love the word picture you have painted with its seemingly similar attributes! Well done all the day long! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2010 at 4:30 PM
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It gets hard when it is cemented CC. Great poem there.
posted by
shobana
on June 7, 2010 at 3:47 PM
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I wouldn't say cement....more like marshmallow but the image of abrasive
metal is unfortunately something that I remember from a woman who or two who set out to make my life a misery.
posted by
Kabu
on June 7, 2010 at 2:49 PM
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strong and powerful lines there cc, loved the end.
posted by
spiderfly
on June 7, 2010 at 1:08 PM
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