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I'll keep reading... Tzippy. Your story has always intrigued and inspired me.
I've been away from your story, poetry and other creative posts far too long.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 9, 2011 at 3:46 PM
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What a shame that such a wonderful moment was spoiled for you all - and I'm wondering what happened next...
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 24, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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More, more, more......
posted by
Greenfields
on June 23, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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Hi Tzippy
catching up with you! America is soooooo big! I go through this every time I go back and I am nearly fifty! It is awesome, coming from compact Japan. But it is also very apparent that there is nothing for me in the big country any more!
posted by
KaBooM62
on June 20, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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Tzippy
A very absorbing read, and I am all for seeing what heppened thereafter
posted by
anib
on June 20, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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JOURNEY to America
Vivid imagery plus truth in telling. A rare combination. joab
posted by
joab3
on June 19, 2010 at 1:57 PM
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You are such a good story teller
posted by
skye08
on June 19, 2010 at 11:03 AM
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You have a wonderfully vivid memory. Life can be so bittersweet.
posted by
mariss9
on June 19, 2010 at 6:40 AM
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Tzippy - I think you really captured the excitement of getting into a new world magnificently.
posted by
shobana
on June 19, 2010 at 5:05 AM
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I am very much interested in what happened next. You had such a long trip, and now something big is going to go down...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 18, 2010 at 8:12 PM
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Tell me more!
I need to know how everything changed! You make this so involving, you are a gifted story teller
posted by
lionreign
on June 18, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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You have such a knack for the cliffhanger......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on June 18, 2010 at 4:46 AM
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tzippy
A The suspense travels with you in your life story love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 17, 2010 at 9:33 PM
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Lady I love your writing, sorry I have been so remiss about reading.
posted by
Justi
on June 17, 2010 at 5:14 PM
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tzip
This is fantastic!! Anxiously awaiting more!!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on June 17, 2010 at 11:21 AM
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Vivid!
posted by
numberonemcfan
on June 17, 2010 at 8:36 AM
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Anticipation and disappointment -- well told.
And the way everything hinges on one tiny fraction of a minute as you get to the house... now we have to know more. Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on June 17, 2010 at 8:05 AM
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Tzippy
Gripping! You beautifully convey a little girl's wide-eyed arrival in a strange new land...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 17, 2010 at 6:13 AM
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waiting to read whats next
posted by
Lanetay
on June 16, 2010 at 10:48 PM
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I love your writing.... can't wait for more xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 16, 2010 at 10:16 PM
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Wow! I can't imagine how utterly horrifying that odor had to be, what awful timing! To be so stoked to be in America and then the house not being as nice as it looked! I look forward to more, your cliffhanger always gets me ready and keeps me involved with the story! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 16, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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TZIPP, Ooh, suspense too!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 16, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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