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What a romantic interface with nature!
posted by
Straightforward
on June 17, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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That was a marvelous poem! I liked how you tied it together at the end! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM
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Thank you for your comment, I do enjoy writing. It is good that you are having a go but you must try to use your own words. Poetry is writing which comes from the soul so therefore is a great release. It can express how you feel at the time. Personally I do not stick to any rules of writing. It comes into my head and goes straight to the keyboard. Please try and get Wayne writing again, he has some great stories in his head and I know he will let them out if he has your approval.
Enjoy the weekend, i am house hunting as usual nada.....spd xx
posted by
spiderfly
on June 17, 2010 at 1:53 PM
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Reads beautifully
as a good poem should.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on June 17, 2010 at 4:44 AM
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