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TIMMY, very gripping and I did see the end coming ...
(wonder of wonders...:) ..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 15, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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What an explosive ending! I did not see it coming! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 11, 2010 at 12:59 AM
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TT
Well done, and I'm glad this is fiction; for if it were 'real'...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 10, 2010 at 9:22 AM
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Yes, that is the million dollar question....and of course, the next one, do
you want to become one? If not, what do you wanna do not to become one?
posted by
Straightforward
on July 10, 2010 at 2:23 AM
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This is so real that I want to shake you and scream that life is too
precious to throw away like this, that no lover is worth this...she will go on and enjoy all she can from life, your family will suffer forever; it will break them apart. That's how well written this little piece is.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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The narrator is in such a precarious position. One wrong move and boom, life spirals out of control...You have a knack for presenting inner turmoil.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 9, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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