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Wow - great work! (And thanks for dropping around my blog. I enjoy your comments as they make me think how a reader might or might not interpret my writing).
posted by
Troosha
on July 18, 2010 at 2:49 PM
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Such a lovely read. I truly enjoyed this poem. It shares such warm and cozy like feelings and the repetitive brings in good rhythm. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 18, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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Sun-filled fun!
posted by
calia14
on July 18, 2010 at 8:57 AM
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smiles of summer
I guess the word is "evocative" - this poem really had me going! You put me in your shoes.
posted by
2902
on July 17, 2010 at 12:35 PM
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Yeah, sometimes, things could just be different.
posted by
Straightforward
on July 17, 2010 at 11:38 AM
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This is great. Makes me feel like a child again.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 17, 2010 at 10:37 AM
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Interesting Sir I note that you love the hubble bubble of domestic scenes and warm cooking smells as you relax and feel the barge passing. I usually take my hearing aid out of my good ear as I prefer silence. I quite enjoyed it anyway, I wish that you would write more often, I suppose that is a recommendation, chin up
posted by
C_C_T
on July 17, 2010 at 10:04 AM
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I can't decide if this is sweetly wise or wisely sweet but I know is amazing writing because it placed me there with you sitting by the opened window, watching and listening to the beautigul bounty of Summer :-) Excellent work John! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 17, 2010 at 9:16 AM
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