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Nice one Straightforward.
What Csherloc said makes great sense...
"accept the outcome".
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 24, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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The sweetness in it
Beautiful. just the "idea of living with you" is comforting enough for me.
posted by
anib
on July 23, 2010 at 10:04 PM
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I often feel like that about God. Can't stop acting as though I believe, even when belief runs thin.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on July 23, 2010 at 9:09 AM
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Catch 22 sometimes. To give up or to stay.
posted by
SpitFire70
on July 22, 2010 at 9:14 PM
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WOw --- it's like you would find favor any either way. This is very thoughtful and I like Straightforward.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 22, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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I know the feeling of this one :-) Excellent work xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2010 at 7:57 PM
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I liked them living with you; very nice twist! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 22, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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& I guess that living’s a two way thing. BC-A, Bill’s RTZst
posted by
BC-A
on July 22, 2010 at 3:59 AM
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I can't give up on you
In these times, the thing to do, is think the thoughts do the actions and accept the outcome. Continue or move on, knowing that you did your part.
posted by
csherloc
on July 22, 2010 at 3:11 AM
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Hi Straight, why not live with him and let your apartment, you will have insurance. Somewhere to go back to if you both become disillusioned, it is not romantic, but neither is insecurity.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 22, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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very nice I know this feeling
posted by
Lanetay
on July 21, 2010 at 10:31 PM
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Some people touch our lives so much that we cannot let them go...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 21, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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Nice idea, but seems a bit personal,and is a bit outside of my purview.
Do you have other thoughts that might be a little more universal?
posted by
jfm32
on July 21, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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