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Just beautiful Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on August 1, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Everytime I read you--such vivid description, I almost feel I'm reading part of a novel.
posted by
jfm32
on August 1, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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Sinome
NN It’s in the breezes love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 1, 2010 at 12:08 AM
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Lovely poem Simone, I do hope though that Summer lasts a few more months.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 31, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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this is exactly how I feel when the summer is just going sooo sooo fast
beautiful poem
posted by
Tzippy
on July 31, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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when summer ends
what a wonderful thing, feelings of the heart, thank you...Utah Jay
posted by
UtahJay
on July 31, 2010 at 10:42 PM
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Sinome
It was 5c here at 6:00am today so this;
days grow shorter and Autumn comes
"....and my perfumed breeze will into a cold and fast wind turn
that will make leaves of many colors dance and fall....." fall has started here as beautifully as you expressed it luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 31, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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Sinome
This is sooooo beautiful......the imagery is wonderful, I could hear the thunder, feel the breeze, sense the coming storm.....and I love the subject, the last days of Summer....wonderful poem all around
posted by
Krisles
on July 31, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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Sinome, Always an uplifting thought -- the silver lining! Bravo.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on July 31, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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that is onethingI really do missfrom Australia ...a big juicy Mango that
you really need toeat sitting in the bath because of all the juice running everywhere.Yum....Queensland grows such beautiful tropical fruit.
posted by
Kabu
on July 31, 2010 at 6:20 PM
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I agree. This summer is going by fast, and a mixed bag it is that autumn will soon be here!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 31, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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