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When some relationships end some cleary do not have anyone to blame like you say...I wonder why time does that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 2, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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This is very special. I just hate it that they ran out of time. But, sooner or later
it happens to us all.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 2, 2010 at 5:40 PM
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I'd say that...
they both met their dreams..it's just that his seems to have lasted longer..nobody's lasts forever..but then, that's just me saying :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 2, 2010 at 2:25 PM
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Very well expressed!
posted by
Nita09
on August 2, 2010 at 9:12 AM
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Sinome
JR It’s nice to get it all together. Dreaming is a state of love love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 2, 2010 at 5:04 AM
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Well Simone, it is the way it happens and perhaps unluckily sometimes one pays for the richness of life. Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on August 2, 2010 at 12:45 AM
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It is sad that their destinies never met Sinome, very lovely poem. Thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on August 2, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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I've seen this happen with several older couples, leaving us to wonder. The bonds that hold man and woman together are mysteries - at once the strongest and flimsiest connections imaginable. A very true and thoughtful
poem.l
posted by
2902
on August 1, 2010 at 11:55 PM
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lovely poem and written with the grace that time does run out but the memories and what it was with truth remains.
posted by
spiderfly
on August 1, 2010 at 11:43 PM
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Sinome, well, that's life in the fast lane. When you depend on phsical attractiveness and romance to define love for you, there is no hope really. INMO, love begins when the romance ends.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 1, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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Oh that was sad.....see I get so involved with your poetry
I get quite carried away..it is so wonderful, always.
posted by
Kabu
on August 1, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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